6 sentece story

this  week in writing    we wrote a six sentence story  about about a charetetor  and adding detail. our focus was on creating sentences. we learnt that the four criteria of a sentence is   capatill  letters 
full stops 
makes seance 
space between each words 

Once upon a time there was a ninja that had so many bombs. He lived in a mansion in Auckland.

His power was that he could super speed  up walls.

His problem was someone stole his bombs.

He was sad.

He found the person that did it and asked for them back then he got them back.

i found this easy becuse it was very fun

what does kindness mean

Today  in writing we brainstormed about  kindness. We split up in to groups of three  and wrote about it then we did a poem.

What i found hard was do the poem the easy part was blogging it. 

today in writing we did a lipagrame picher to do a sentence without the litter Theres my work  

you can try it to let me now what you come up with in the coments byeeeeeeeeee ✌✌✌✌✌✌❤❤❤❤😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎💰💰💰💰💰💰💰💰💰💰💰💰💰

hey readers we have bean writing about a pic we seen of a kid on a plane heres my story

I can see clouds

I feel scared  of sitting on the wing

It was a lovely summer day  I wanted to know what it would be like if i sat on a private jets wing when it is flying     in the air for 48 hours i can see the clouds from up here it is lovely oh it is time for bed it is sooo beautiful at night

hokey

this morning peter from Canterbury hockey he came here to teach  in to teach us  about hocky he teched  us to doge stop dribble at the end we played a game like rob the nest but with a hocky sticks then we when back to class.  
The hardiest bit was rob the nest  in hocky.