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Friday, March 22, 2019

6 sentece story

this  week in writing    we wrote a six sentence story  about about a charetetor  and adding detail. our focus was on creating sentences. we learnt that the four criteria of a sentence is   capatill  letters 
full stops 
makes seance 
space between each words 



Once upon a time there was a ninja that had so many bombs. He lived in a mansion in Auckland.
His power was that he could super speed  up walls.
His problem was someone stole his bombs.
He was sad.

He found the person that did it and asked for them back then he got them back.
i found this easy becuse it was very fun

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2 comments:

  1. Miss GoslinApril 28, 2019 at 5:10 PM

    Hi Anthony, Miss Goslin here, thanks for posting your six sentence story. How creative were you to think about writing about a ninja in a mansion, very cool. Next time I would like you to add more detail to your sentences. For example the sentence "he was sad".
    Looking forward to hearing back from you.
    Miss Goslin

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  2. AnonymousMay 1, 2019 at 11:12 AM

    thanks miss goslin i will try next time

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